What did you call me?

BTW that sword arm pointing out is BOSS HOG

You might want to put darker lines around the hand itself though. I don't fully understand perspective, but I've been told that that makes that area seem "closer", like the lines are closer to the viewer, you know?

So basically I'm saying the lines get thicker the closer the thing is to the viewer, like they'd be boldest on the sword, then a little less on her hand, and normal on her shoulder, right? BUT I'VE NEVER BEEN ABLE TO DO IT RIGHT... but I thought I'd share that trick I heard about. It makes sense on paper to me, but it's hard. But if you do it, maybe just make the outside lines darker and leave the others. OR MAYBE THAT'S DUMB AND I'M TRYING TO GIVE ADVICE THAT SUCKS but yeah.